Talk:Shivans - Revision history

TopAce at 07:49, 17 July 2011

2011-07-17T07:49:02Z

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	Doesn't the Ancient-Shivan War count as one of the most devastating wars? Hell, I mean, a whole species was wiped out, planets were destroyed, and a star was exploded. --[[User:FlamingCobra\|FlamingCobra]] 21:29, 16 July 2011 (UTC)		Doesn't the Ancient-Shivan War count as one of the most devastating wars? Hell, I mean, a whole species was wiped out, planets were destroyed, and a star was exploded. --[[User:FlamingCobra\|FlamingCobra]] 21:29, 16 July 2011 (UTC)
			*Good point. I edited the intro a bit. It certainly requires some further editing. - [[User:TopAce\|TopAce]] 07:49, 17 July 2011 (UTC)

2011-07-16T21:29:35Z

Devastating Wars: new section

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	Upload it, add it in somewhere else in the article, don't replace the existing one. More pictures = good. Even if we (somehow) ended up with too many pictures, we could put them in a gallery. [[User:Black Wolf\|Black Wolf]] 02:56, 13 June 2011 (UTC)		Upload it, add it in somewhere else in the article, don't replace the existing one. More pictures = good. Even if we (somehow) ended up with too many pictures, we could put them in a gallery. [[User:Black Wolf\|Black Wolf]] 02:56, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
	Awesome, love it. [[User:Black Wolf\|Black Wolf]] 05:19, 14 June 2011 (UTC)		Awesome, love it. [[User:Black Wolf\|Black Wolf]] 05:19, 14 June 2011 (UTC)

			== Devastating Wars ==

			Doesn't the Ancient-Shivan War count as one of the most devastating wars? Hell, I mean, a whole species was wiped out, planets were destroyed, and a star was exploded. --[[User:FlamingCobra\|FlamingCobra]] 21:29, 16 July 2011 (UTC)

2011-06-14T05:19:24Z

Picture

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	Upload it, add it in somewhere else in the article, don't replace the existing one. More pictures = good. Even if we (somehow) ended up with too many pictures, we could put them in a gallery. [[User:Black Wolf\|Black Wolf]] 02:56, 13 June 2011 (UTC)		Upload it, add it in somewhere else in the article, don't replace the existing one. More pictures = good. Even if we (somehow) ended up with too many pictures, we could put them in a gallery. [[User:Black Wolf\|Black Wolf]] 02:56, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
			Awesome, love it. [[User:Black Wolf\|Black Wolf]] 05:19, 14 June 2011 (UTC)

2011-06-13T02:56:30Z

Picture

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	I have taken another picture for the Shivans article. It is the same Shivan in almost the exact same position, but it's from the cutscene so it's in color and it's much easier to see. Should I upload it or just leave it the way it is? --[[User:FlamingCobra\|FlamingCobra]] 20:47, 12 June 2011 (UTC)		I have taken another picture for the Shivans article. It is the same Shivan in almost the exact same position, but it's from the cutscene so it's in color and it's much easier to see. Should I upload it or just leave it the way it is? --[[User:FlamingCobra\|FlamingCobra]] 20:47, 12 June 2011 (UTC)

			Upload it, add it in somewhere else in the article, don't replace the existing one. More pictures = good. Even if we (somehow) ended up with too many pictures, we could put them in a gallery. [[User:Black Wolf\|Black Wolf]] 02:56, 13 June 2011 (UTC)

2011-06-12T20:47:17Z

Picture: new section

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	::This article is in awful shape. I pulled out a couple choice oddities but it needs a rewrite, as Snail suggested. [[User:General Battuta\|General Battuta]] 02:24, 25 June 2009 (UTC)		::This article is in awful shape. I pulled out a couple choice oddities but it needs a rewrite, as Snail suggested. [[User:General Battuta\|General Battuta]] 02:24, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

			== Picture ==

			I have taken another picture for the Shivans article. It is the same Shivan in almost the exact same position, but it's from the cutscene so it's in color and it's much easier to see. Should I upload it or just leave it the way it is? --[[User:FlamingCobra\|FlamingCobra]] 20:47, 12 June 2011 (UTC)

2009-06-26T07:27:53Z

SYNTAX FIX, nya~

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	:Go ahead. I've no idea where to start. If you can do a better job, go for it and I'll see how I can help along the way. -- [[User:Androgeos Exeunt\|Androgeos Exeunt]] 22:32, 16 October 2008 (CDT)		:Go ahead. I've no idea where to start. If you can do a better job, go for it and I'll see how I can help along the way. -- [[User:Androgeos Exeunt\|Androgeos Exeunt]] 22:32, 16 October 2008 (CDT)
	** This article is in awful shape. I pulled out a couple choice oddities but it needs a rewrite, as Snail suggested. [[User:General Battuta\|General Battuta]] 02:24, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
			::This article is in awful shape. I pulled out a couple choice oddities but it needs a rewrite, as Snail suggested. [[User:General Battuta\|General Battuta]] 02:24, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

2009-06-25T02:24:32Z

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	:Go ahead. I've no idea where to start. If you can do a better job, go for it and I'll see how I can help along the way. -- [[User:Androgeos Exeunt\|Androgeos Exeunt]] 22:32, 16 October 2008 (CDT)		:Go ahead. I've no idea where to start. If you can do a better job, go for it and I'll see how I can help along the way. -- [[User:Androgeos Exeunt\|Androgeos Exeunt]] 22:32, 16 October 2008 (CDT)
			** This article is in awful shape. I pulled out a couple choice oddities but it needs a rewrite, as Snail suggested. [[User:General Battuta\|General Battuta]] 02:24, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

2008-10-17T03:32:20Z

Reply; yeah, I'm terrible at re-writes.

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	In that case, the source should be stated and the text reverted to the original. Right now I'd have to say this is a pretty rubbish article. I'd like to completely rewrite it if nobody minds. - [[User:Snail\|Snail]] 14:29, 16 October 2008 (CDT)		In that case, the source should be stated and the text reverted to the original. Right now I'd have to say this is a pretty rubbish article. I'd like to completely rewrite it if nobody minds. - [[User:Snail\|Snail]] 14:29, 16 October 2008 (CDT)

			:Go ahead. I've no idea where to start. If you can do a better job, go for it and I'll see how I can help along the way. -- [[User:Androgeos Exeunt\|Androgeos Exeunt]] 22:32, 16 October 2008 (CDT)

2008-10-16T19:29:03Z

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	Not sure that's necessary or wise. Much of it is copying the FS2 techroom description. - [[User:Ngtm1r\|Ngtm1r]] 14:06, 16 October 2008 (CDT)		Not sure that's necessary or wise. Much of it is copying the FS2 techroom description. - [[User:Ngtm1r\|Ngtm1r]] 14:06, 16 October 2008 (CDT)

			In that case, the source should be stated and the text reverted to the original. Right now I'd have to say this is a pretty rubbish article. I'd like to completely rewrite it if nobody minds. - [[User:Snail\|Snail]] 14:29, 16 October 2008 (CDT)

2008-10-16T19:06:34Z

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	This article is written primarily in an in-universe context. Someone fix this. - [[User:Snail\|Snail]] 06:10, 12 October 2008 (CDT)		This article is written primarily in an in-universe context. Someone fix this. - [[User:Snail\|Snail]] 06:10, 12 October 2008 (CDT)

			Not sure that's necessary or wise. Much of it is copying the FS2 techroom description. - [[User:Ngtm1r\|Ngtm1r]] 14:06, 16 October 2008 (CDT)