https://wiki.hard-light.org/index.php?action=history&feed=atom&title=Talk%3AVulture_Empire 2026-11-15T23:02:51Z Revision history for this page on the wiki MediaWiki 1.43.9 https://wiki.hard-light.org/index.php?title=Talk:Vulture_Empire&diff=27162&oldid=prev 2009-12-16T21:20:04Z

<p><span class="autocomment">Style</span></p> <table style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122;" data-mw="interface"> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <tr class="diff-title" lang="en"> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">← Older revision</td> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">Revision as of 21:20, 16 December 2009</td> </tr><tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno" id="mw-diff-left-l3">Line 3:</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">Line 3:</td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Seriously, IMHO, this article needs a massive rewrite. Things like &quot;(which was formed in 1 year....weird)&quot; really do not sound professional or encyclopedic AT ALL. In the same vein, you reference lots and lots of astrographical terms that, in the context of this entry, have not been defined yet (Vulture Arm, for example, or Orion Arm).</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Seriously, IMHO, this article needs a massive rewrite. Things like &quot;(which was formed in 1 year....weird)&quot; really do not sound professional or encyclopedic AT ALL. In the same vein, you reference lots and lots of astrographical terms that, in the context of this entry, have not been defined yet (Vulture Arm, for example, or Orion Arm).</div></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="−"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>In addition, "This comes at a cost though. They use a lot of warships, ranging from Cruisers to Corvettes with Flak guns on them. Long story short, if the Arcadians didn't use Stratagy and Tactics (as the Vultures only used Tactics) it may have been Lights out For Arcadia." borders on rambling and incoherent; It is impossible to use [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Military_tactics Tactics] or [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Strategy Strategy] exclusively.</div></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>In addition, "This comes at a cost though. They use a lot of warships, ranging from Cruisers to Corvettes with Flak guns on them. Long story short, if the Arcadians didn't use Stratagy and Tactics (as the Vultures only used Tactics) it may have been Lights out For Arcadia." borders on rambling and incoherent; It is impossible to use [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Military_tactics Tactics] or [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Strategy Strategy] exclusively. <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">[[User:The E|The E]] 21:20, 16 December 2009 (UTC)</ins></div></td></tr> </table>

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<p>Some style concerns</p> <p><b>New page</b></p><div>==Style==<br /> <br /> Seriously, IMHO, this article needs a massive rewrite. Things like &quot;(which was formed in 1 year....weird)&quot; really do not sound professional or encyclopedic AT ALL. In the same vein, you reference lots and lots of astrographical terms that, in the context of this entry, have not been defined yet (Vulture Arm, for example, or Orion Arm).<br /> <br /> In addition, &quot;This comes at a cost though. They use a lot of warships, ranging from Cruisers to Corvettes with Flak guns on them. Long story short, if the Arcadians didn&#039;t use Stratagy and Tactics (as the Vultures only used Tactics) it may have been Lights out For Arcadia.&quot; borders on rambling and incoherent; It is impossible to use [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Military_tactics Tactics] or [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Strategy Strategy] exclusively.</div>

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